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Englisch (US)
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Vereinfachtes Chinesisch (China)
If Maybelline was a girl, I think she is a young girl, below 25 years old. She has strong characteristics, she is sassy but not depraved, devastated. She is excited with the new world and willing to deal with the world, but she is naïve, as well. She’s still young. klingt das natürlich?
- Englisch (US)
Unnatürlich
If you're attempting to describe a character, you shouldn't use " think, " as it weakens your statment. If you're going to say something, you don't have to repeat it later. Here's how I think you should've written it:
" Maybelline is a young girl who is younger than 25. She has apparent characteristics, such as being sassy but not depraved. She's excited with the world and eager to deal with it, but she is also naive. "
I hope this helps! :)
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Anderer Grund
- Englisch (US)
Etwas unnatürlich
Maybelline’s naïveté encourages me to believe that she is a young woman, 25 at most, if that. She exhibits strong characteristics such as her sassiness but it is clear that she has yet to be devastated. Her excitement to experience the New World further depicts her innocence. / that kind of how I would have written it but that it my be a bit much
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